【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
4 d3 Q6 L1 p' t3 k4 A6 n$ _: f( n袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

/ b$ F, p4 a1 X1 i8 |5 a# L我想我從未表露出
6 g7 m# J' I: {/ g) s深藏在我心底的那句
. {* z  ]5 D) D( e/ P2 y我愛你  
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* d& M3 K6 p( E4 H( UFrom the first moment we met,
1 j5 e% \9 o) f/ p3 @2 p; v4 b8 S& X0 lI already loved you with all my heart

在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
我的心
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We meet and talk everyday,
5 m% n# z; A8 t3 R0 T  \5 E5 M7 ?But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

9 k+ |# D6 E# x" V8 a$ ~/ f$ m0 x% P縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
( c7 `$ K, ~) D; n" ?* o9 b2 l搜尋著你的魂
3 Z  f5 w. l# T3 L5 T* V; Q( O) T: @4 ]我也許就能了解
你的心情

7 h; G5 t( }& v+ HLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
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' \& T- s- \' Q; N3 i8 xI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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& [# l( L! a5 P; }; T% u6 `7 UIf today isn’t too late,
9 a( W; i5 @7 v8 F' j* D8 s$ H5 cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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8 i+ r7 M( }5 K# R3 ~8 E; R# d希望今天還不會太晚
$ Z5 L7 ^% x3 u讓我向你表白
3 X' \* Q$ ^6 B2 d" k' Z; x" b我心底的秘密
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8 C- w2 m' I( `* Q5 s' NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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2 V9 m& }( u! G! e/ I不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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: p/ m8 P: m* v7 p3 H! HCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- A( h0 e$ D5 v8 h  T可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
4 s# `0 _8 F/ O7 Y* y收在你心裡
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Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

2 K4 H1 {$ G* v0 C. ?愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?

+ W/ I$ m( t5 D! PI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

愛你 我想要告訴你
# @8 Q$ C( o- `- c2 W7 W0 D卻還是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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也許有一天
) m' j! W1 N: ?% S$ Z; n你將從我指間滑漏

9 w7 \/ |$ K' EIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
5 R6 u% c  C2 i7 }8 ~讓我向你表白
! C& }/ R- F3 `+ L我心底的秘密

; G5 t. V: g8 \/ {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

5 K, v. h7 S5 M/ ]5 G不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

: K2 V% V7 P/ l- L( A9 H可否讓我托付給你?
0 o8 _1 b& G, o托付我的愛
, F$ r% @  e+ f* l收在你心裡

Can I entrust it to you?
! T! `3 o0 O( f$ r" o/ [Entrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
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皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
8 f9 ^0 G: X+ a3 D: {( m# P凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂

- e: u! Y  G# E* w2 H, O/ nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ j; k+ U/ r* M; g0 h6 R6 Q* q2 f0 aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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, K& x& j$ L+ `  M; g5 O2 U+ P& K月光映在我的眼底
" t4 m& ?3 b2 k4 S5 {3 V月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂
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+ L8 R( d& v7 y6 g( o+ @& ]0 L4 X: hIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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我心卻充斥著憂鬱
! Y: Z  I2 j* u# `4 f& o: X* B害怕我們的愛
終將逝去

1 @8 t( l, B% K9 rYou needn’t fear anything
* L/ L' w9 X% V) ~# b( a6 D, k: PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

你勿須擔心憂鬱
3 i1 Y8 X- Y. F8 n我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
9 C& N: S) |" L, ^7 x堅定不渝
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Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
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你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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4 C4 W1 J) h4 ?. V: J1 ]I love you I love you with all my heart
( U  u& z( ^% {$ sNothing can compare to my love

我的愛 全心全意
# A% W& L. q7 o你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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6 u( x/ K7 @+ |. d& b- o, [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?

, F* B* ~+ u7 L% R能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) g2 b9 O6 R2 X2 s2 _' Z整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

I want so much to see inside your heart

; ?2 e* B1 ~, B& P7 n: d我想看透你的心
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I invite you to rip it out
  c" P" e- C5 i% a; ]& Q' ]6 H  hTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
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我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
來證明我的愛

9 `8 e" W! Z2 O; oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

! d& |- H# p3 l/ n+ V我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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可惜我未能以死證明
! V( b, S: J! d) C3 E! l( o) j我只有一張口
) Q& J& O! F( A3 M遠遠不及千萬

With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it

這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上
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8 v$ ]; {6 j4 p* x0 Z3 G4 |3 \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 a8 o. ?# G/ r5 K; S如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
4 x$ e. A, N% D0 x! ?0 \千萬個心思

Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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+ L! \' l' i. q5 H& h' O訴說千萬個
1 P: X" ?; X: j1 G愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
9 E: m5 i3 }8 i  B! O% A$ {, ^xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒